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How does this sentence: "did this tumultuous and mournful uproar arise" fit in the sentence below?

I don't know how it (the cry) struck the others: to me it seemed as though the mist itself had screamed, so suddenly, and apparently from all sides at once, did this tumultuous and mournful uproar arise.

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1. I don't know how it (the cry) struck the others; to me it seemed as though the mist itself had screamed. So suddenly, and apparently from all sides at once, did this tumultuous and mournful uproar arise. yeah sounds perfect.
2. Yes, it fits perfectly. This is well written and very descriptive.